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Secret Alien Twin Sister - Chapter 1

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Chapter 1 - Secret Twin Sister
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"Long ago there is a place called Earth where it's been populated with humans. We have seen a lot of people working mundane activities and somewhat acting like robots but what if we tell you that there's Extraterrestrial lifeform living among us. They can impersonate you! They can live together in our world. And they can murder you the least you suspected! So tonight we are going to bring you awareness to..."

CLICK!

"Honey! I told you to stop watching that ridiculous documentary show!" the brunette housewife telling his husband after she switches off the television.
"Sorry dear! It was a mis-click!" the black hair man wearing his business suit apologizes to her.  "Anyway, are our kids up?"
"Yes they are!" she says as she then walks near the staircase "Hana! Hakumei! Hurry up! You don't want to be late for the first day at school!"
"Yes mom!" both girls says.

We then see two girls rushing down the stairs while carrying their school bags. They seem to be wearing a yellow school uniform dress. Both girls seem to have a pigtails and brown hair. The only difference is that one of the girls has short hair while the other has long hair.

"Morning dad!" both of them says as they take their bread and a carton of milk.
"Morning girls!" he says "Hope you have a good time on your first day at school!"
"You too need to be getting to work too you know!" the mom tells his husband.

The door of the second story house opens as both girls’ rushes out waving goodbye as they run to school.

"Hurry up Hakumei!" Hana tells her "We can't be late for school!"
"I'm coming!" Hakumei tells her while trying to follow her.

"Hi! I'm Hana Hoshiko! Born in 3rd of June in Shinjuku like my twin sister, Hakumei Hoshiko, over there chasing me! Today is the first day of school where me and my sister happens to be classmates for the first time in Morikino high school! I'm so excited as a 15 year old girl I can't wait to learn what new experiences I would learn today! Despite my cheerful attitude, I always end up two classrooms away from my smart sister in middle school. I kinda envy her since she studies way harder than I do even though I never seen her study... But today we get to enter in the same high school together in 1-2. Ureshi~ Anyway... We live with our family where my dad, Fuma Hoshiko works as a business man in some toy company while my mom, Mari Hasegawa works at home."

Just then they could hear the school bell rings as both sisters try to run as fast as possible into the school. They manage to enter the school as the hall monitor, who is standing near the gate, checks the time with his timer.

"Just in time a nick of time..." Hana says while trying to take a deep breath.
"Yeah! I'm glad we made it..." says Hakumei while trying to catch her breath as well.
"Yes!" the hall monitor approaches them as he points at Hakumei "But not for her!"
"What why?" Hakumei says in surprise.
"Because you were 1.5 seconds late than your sister!" the hall monitor tells her while jotting down some notes "I let you off the hook this time but if I catch you late again, you will be seen in detention... what's your name?"
"Hakumei! Hakumei Hoshiko" she answers.
"Hmm... oh I know you! You're that girl who keeps getting second place in middle school test result!" the hall monitor says while taking a better look. "And I take it that must be your twin sister Hana!"
"Yes! Thank you very much!"
"Heh!" the hall monitor jeers "Your sister's good in athletic while you are in studies! But anyway get into class now!"
"Hai!" Both reply.

And so starts a new day of school where the twins enjoy their school time on their first day. While Hana is more interested in sports and activities (even though she is seen sleeping in class), her sister Hakumei is seen jotting down notes in her book. Both seem to make new friend together as they are join by their friends from middle school. Her friends are amaze of Hana's cooking skills since Hakumei sucks at it. Time passes by as the school ends with the school bell rings.

"Alright!" Hakumei tells her sister as she already packed her stuffs "See you back home!"
"See ya! Hana waves her goodbye while a few friends join her as Hakumei leaves.
"Hey Hana! Is it true that you’ve cheated during your test just to join the same class with her?" the red-hair girl with specs jokes at her.
"No, Jane!" Hana tells her "I really study very hard to come this far!"
"Hana-chan, for a hundred times it's 'Jachan'!" Jachan corrects her "J-A-C-H-A-N! Don't you agree Himiko?"
"Yes!" says the blonde curly hair girl "I kinda think it's cute... Maybe..."
"Well maybe because you keep writing all though sleazy scoops of yours!"  the black short hair girl tells her.
"Not you to Michiru...." Jachan mutters "So anyway you're still protective towards your sister?"
"Well yeah... I sure do!" Hana says with a smile "She did help me a lot when I was young and I too help her back..."

"Ever since I was seven Hakumei helps me gain some friends because I'm a bit shy like she is. Since then she's been really supporting on me how to build up my character and even one saves me from a couple of dogs. That is when I decided that I too should grow up and protect her as well. But currently I see her coming home from school after class is over and never takes any club activities. I wonder why... But anyway as for me I take volleyball and cheerleading club to boost my agility and stamina,"

It's already evening as Hana walk pathways with her friends from the crossroad. She was about to head back home until she notices a familiar girl from afar.

"Sis?" Hana says to herself.

Hana feels odd. She assumes she'll be back home or head somewhere. But instead of calling Hakumei, she decides to follow her to see what's she really up to. 20 minutes later, she sees her walk into the abandon warehouse as the door closes behind her. Hana tries to open the door slowly but it seems the door's lock from the inside. Hana notice a peephole and take a look. She wasn't too happy on what she sees next. She sees another girl only in long black hair with glasses pointing an odd looking gun at her. Without warning she could only see both her sister and the mysterious girl starts shooting at each other. Shock she intends to call the police but worries that her sister might get involved. So she runs around the warehouse and she was lucky to find an open window. While Hana enters the building, both girls seems to be shooting at each other nonstop with their guns.

"Hehehe! You can't take me down, hunter!" the black hair girl says.
"Oh yeah! We see about that!" Hakumei replies by shooting at her.

Both girls keep dueling pistols at each other while Hana just watches behind the crates. Hakumei manages to disarm the mysterious girl but as she runs near her, suddenly, she pulls out another gun and shoots her onto her left side of Hakumei's face as Hakumei crashes into the boxes. Hana is shock as she could only watch as Hakumei fires one last shot at her. However it seems that the mysterious gun seems to absorb her shot.

"Nice try but it looks like you are going to die here!" the mysterious girl laughs as she was about to aim at her.
"I'm... not... done..." Hakumei refuses to give up

As she begins to shoot her, all the sudden Hana decides to rush up to them as the mysterious girl make an evil grin.

"Goodbye! Hunter!" the mysterious girl shoots her.
"NOOOOOO!!!" Hana yells.

The moment she yells, both girls are shock to see her as Hakumei run into the shot, taking it for Hakumei.

"SIS!!!" Hakumei yells.

Getting shot, Hana was also blown into the boxes, landing her safely. As for the mysterious girl, she was shock that she didn't expect it to happen. But all the sudden, Hakumei's mouth shoots out what appears to be a gun turret as it shoots onto the mysterious girl's head as she collapse. Hakumei sighs as the tank cannon pushes right back into her mouth as she looks at Hana.

"Hana! Are you alright?" Hakumei rushes toward her sister.
"I'm sorry... I thought I follow you since you're in danger!" says Hana as she opens her eyes slowly. "You got shot in the head,"
"Don't be stupid! You would get killed!" Hakumei tells her

However Hana is shock as she couldn't believe what she is seeing.

The left of Hakumei's face has cracked one which what it looks like to be a robotic shell. She even sees something inside the head.

Hana is shock as she sees her face in horror. Hakumei is also shock to see her face open up the moment she looks near a puddle of water.

"Sis! Your face..." Hana points at her "What happen to you..."
"Geez!" Hakumei sighs "I told that perv to install that shield but he wouldn't listen..." Hakumei sighs. "Crap! I can't move around like this..."

Soon they hear a loud beeping sound as Hakumei's eyes slowly change as it soon turn blank. Without warning, Hana was even more horrified as to see Hakumei's head open up like a shell. Exiting out of it is what she sees to be a small creature who’s wearing a green suit and helmet with a small gun. it soon takes out it's helmet revealing a white fur foxlike alien creature with red eyes.

"Sorry! But I have to use this!" he says while shooting at her.

It seems to shoot at her head as it looks harmless. However he's surprise on what happens next.

"What... What did you do to me? And who are you? Where is my sister?" Hana ask the alien creature.
"No way! My memory gun doesn't work?" the creature says in shock.

The alien tries to reload his gun and shoots again but also fails.

"What are you?" Hana asks.
"Damnit! It's not working!" the creature says. "Plan B then!"

All the sudden, Hana sees the creature blows some dust onto her as she feels sleepy. She soon collapses onto the ground while she could hear the alien's words before she pass out.

"Alright! Marlone Cortex from the Planet Rewort, you are under arrest for illegally transporting weapons to aliens..."

Hana pass out as she doesn't know what happen next. Until she hears a birds chirping as she gets up. She realizes that she's in her pajamas and wondering what happen, thinking if she was dreaming. Oddly she doesn't seem to remember in her bed. She checks the clock to see it's 6.45a.m. With no choice, she decides to get up early and head to the bathroom. The moment she opens the door, she sees Hakumei open the door. Both sisters are shock due to Hana's scream.

"Sis! Is that you, sis?" Hana asks.
"Huh? What are you talking about?" Hakumei replies her, puzzled.

Hana explains to her during breakfast on her weird dream yesterday and the only thing her family gives is laughter.

"That's one weird dream you have there, Hana!" Fuma tells her "Did you eat too many strawberries and mango cookies again?"
"No but I swear I don't seem to remember how I end up back home..." Hana tells them.
"I actually find you near the park yesterday and you were so tired you skip dinner," Hakumei tells her.
"Really?" Hana looks at her, less reassuring her.
"Yes! Honest!" Hakumei tells her.
"Seriously, why would a weird creature be inside Hakumei's head?" Mari tells her "Besides I doubt your story make sense as her face looks fine!"

However Hana looks at Hakumei unsure to herself. However Hakumei decides to hold her hand and force her to pinch her face.

"OW! OW! OW!" Hakumei wails a bit in pain. "Convince now?"
Hana is shock as her skin is real and sigh "Yeah..."

Days later, Hana seems to be enjoying her school likes usual with her sister. However she seems to have recurring nightmares of her sister being an alien who wants to take over the world or probe her. She couldn't shake off that ill felling on what happen. She couldn't bring it up telling her friends as she knew the story is too ridiculous to be true. However a week has passed during that incident and she decides to go back to that warehouse to confirm her suspicious.
After Hakumei left school, she decides to skip practice and heads off an hour after her twin sister left. She decides that if she's really dreaming, she would not see any weird moments there. Hana rushes to the warehouse as quickly as possible as she checks out the door only this time the door was open. However she hears a conversation in the warehouse while she takes a peek. She sees Hakumei (much to her shock) and a couple of bikers being tied up except their leader who seems to be lifted by one hand by Hakumei.

"Listen! Please let me go! I swear I never terrorize anyone... snort~" the biker leader says.
Hakumei sighs and says "Look Buta! I do not wish to do this but you have been robbing human banks for a long time and I already give you a stern warning in not doing it again!"
"Hold on! It was a mistake! I thought it was fun to do so. You know what I mean..." Buta tells her "Special Agent Hakumei from the Alien Bureau Investigation!"
"What? Special agent?" Hana thinks to herself.
"In any case... please exit out of the suit... or else" Hakumei threatens Buta as a turret appears out of her mouth "You will be shot!"

Buta was upset that he couldn't get away until all the sudden Hana accidentally push the boxes causing her to drop. Hakumei and Buta looks at her as both are shock to see her.

"Sister?" Hakumei shocking says to herself.

But without warning Buta manages to knock her down as Buta quickly release a few of the bikers with his chains. Buta then quickly starts his motorcycle as he taunts Buta while the rest of his members take their partners into their seats.

"You! You better not find us again! Or you'll be sorry, hunter!" as Buta drives off with his gang members.

"Get Back HERE!!" Hakumei says angrily.

While they could hear them laughing Hakumei is furious that they get away until Hana pulls her hand stopping her.

"Hakumei!" Hana angrily tells her "Or whoever you are! What have you done with my sister?"

Realizing that she couldn't get away since she realize her turrent is in her mouth, she push it back and gives a sigh.

"Well sis... I'm sorry that I've lied for all these years... I thought I could hide it but..."

Hakumei's skull opens as the same alien Hana saw before greets her. Steam seems to come out from her head as Hakumei's 'body' is in cooldown.

"I am Hakumei, an alien from another planet and acts as an undercover cop for the Alien Bureau Investigation!"

And so with the awkward silences Hana could just stare her or him in shock of the revelation.

Chapter 1 End

Daily Chapter Information
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Name: Hana Hoshiko
Age: 15
Birthplace: Shinjuku, Japan
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Black
Height:  5 feet 4 inches
Occupation: Student in Morikino High School
Hobbies: Any sports related
Likes: Hakumei, Strawberry & Mango smoothie
Dislikes: Snakes & broccoli
The first ever OC story that I've written. Note that the names in this story are based on the names I've seen and kinda come up with different names and variation. No offense intended.

Again sorry if there's any 'bad grammar' so hope you guys enjoy it.
© 2016 - 2024 AndrewWong
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Crosswire40's avatar
This is a really nice story so far Andrew. I love what you've done given the briefness of what inspired you to write this. There's still room for improvement in regards to grammar and descriptions but the setup itself is great! You should feel proud .3.